LincolnLouder
1 years ago
Ideas for (Reader X Harem)
Chapter 1 Prologue
http://pastebin.com/AdM3u1bU (Done)

Chapter 2 Untold Feelings (Done)
http://pastebin.com/WdAHv8tc

Chapter 3 When will you notice?
(WIP right now no link yet....)

Well i thought about it and posted it again early again and continue it more
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
Heads or tails finfic idea
How about a fic were lincoln died and one week later his sisters find him sleeping in his bed at first some of his sisters try to deny the fact the he is alive and others are start thinking he is a mental hallucination and leni thinks he just got back form a trip after that mess the girls see this as a second chance and start to become overprotective and clingy and lincoln wants to know why?
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
Ideas for (Reader X Harem) review
You have a good start and the idea itself is very original but it still needs a little work in terms of backstory we need to know what we did to make them fall for us.
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
Bell Your fanfic and suggestions

Bell im not gonna lie that is a really good fanfic for the feels but i believe someone is already working on that so for right now ill wait for a day or two to see if someone did,


Yes your right i do need to clear up some backstory or else wouldn't make much sense, thank you for your suggestion im quite inspired now in fanfics :)
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
But bell

But im molding the story to like a mystery you know? making it so that you discover things through the story, if i gave the reason why the sisters like you early in the story would feel uninteresting? amiright?
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
True true
But it does sit up the stage for comfy moments
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
This fic....

Does the fic im working on need to have Lewdness because of the Harem category?
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
Update review
You're doing a real good job with this fic. The story it self has good pacing its not to fast or slow just right and you do update regularly which is very uncommon on this board since most of the writers have 2 to 3 storys up at once so nothing gets gone but you my friend stick to what your doing and no harem fics are normally lewd but you can still keep it cute and sweet but if you do plan to go full NSFW pls add NSFW
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
To tell the truth

This is actually the first time im actually writing a fic, and the reason i have to update it at random times is because of summer work the only time i have to update is at night time.

Thank you for you feedback it means a lot :).
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
Yay
Well chapter 1 is finished this time, now ill be working on chapter 2 which will be much longer than chapter 2, Lets say Chapter 1 was a prologue
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
Just wondering
Will there be girls outside of the family to?
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
Hmmm

Yeah it will all be revealed in chapter 2 which will explain everything and unveil more secrets from the girls :) .
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
Bell

HEY dude your story that you suggested is being worked on right now

It'll take a while since im trying to make the Readers cry >:) (possibly myself too)

But when it releases ill put it up here first, the Title is "Dancing on the Moon"
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
Bless you
Thank you for this gift for the board has been dry for days
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
Yep

Bell i could give you the site to it so u can preview it first msg me at jhonsymon@gmail.com if you want it (since you suggested you get to help me with it).
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
And also

Will the story be lewd? or something?
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
We got problem
Can't find you on gmail is it jhonsymon or Jhon Symon Panilagao?
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
Jhon Symon Panilagao
its the one on the title

And i messaged you too
LincolnLouder
1 years ago
yay

Well chapter 2 is in WIP right now which will have more (promise)
Bell_wraith
1 years ago
11:32 review of Untold feels
Ok the fic is coming along great you did quite alot in story telling and writing while setting the stage for some date night jelly


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